Children of the Light

By Delphine Saucier

Draft 3 Posted Date: 7/5/2013

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Genre:

Contemporary Fantasy

Word Count:

5,217

About the Book:

Children of the Light is a contemporary fantasy that was inspired by a non-fiction medieval book on gardening. Discover how children and teens find themselves face to face with dragons and how they complete the quest assigned to them by a unicorn.

About the Author:

Delphine Saucier is a pen name for a freelance non-fiction writer who has never written fiction in her life. The name is to protect the professional reputation of the writer. Saucier lives with her husband and twins in the cold white north, though it was nearly 90 degrees today.

Author's Note:

If you've ever planted a garden with seeds only to discover that you don't know the difference between a weed and the seed's plant, you can understand just how much your review will be helpful to this writer. Has anything good come from this seed or is the story a weed that should be ripped up?

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