About the Book:
Construction worker Flynn Dalton loves building things in the great outdoors, even if those outdoors are in the Pleasantville meets Stepford Wives town of Festivity, Florida. When her pick-up truck almost ends up in the town's infamous Dead Man's Pond, she realizes there might be more than rumors to the darker side of the happy little community. And when her ex-lover's ghost appears at the lake to warn her away, things get a whole lot weirder.
Flynn's current girlfriend, Genesis, is a nationally known psychic, so Flynn is accustomed to dealing, at least indirectly, with a little weirdness. But the pond fixates on Flynn as its next victim, and she's forced to get much closer to the psychic realm, and her own latent psychic abilities, than she ever wanted.
About the Author:
Ellie Isis teaches middle school by day and writes contemporary fantasy/romance by night.
This manuscript is complete at 89K words, though I've only put a few chapters up on this site so far. Will add more if there is interest.
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