The Ascension

By Harrison Voss

Draft 5 Posted Date: 8/7/2014

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In the 23rd century a young revolutionary gives an interview on her illegal endeavors. Born on a distant mining planet, the Survi Asteria lives a life of mindless working day in and day out. Inspired by her brother, Asteria begins to wonder and perhaps even think about the world above her. A strict social system holds society in place where slaves are seen as nothing more than pieces of machinery that can easily be disposed of and replaced. After being freed from the mines that she considers her home, Asteria travels through her native planet and Earth, discovering the morals of society and the consequences because of them.

About the Author:

I am a high school writer that enjoys writing fantasy and science fiction.

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