About the Book:
Dyson Academy teaches the skilled and the unusual of the galaxy how to use Creativity, the bizarre power that drives the galaxy. Anne is neither. Unaware of either the Academy or the greater galaxy, she's dropped into the Academy with no warning. Things go downhill from there.
Between mastering her own ability to use Creativity and simply understanding the bizarre world she's now in, Anne keeps finding herself at the centre of controversy. A conflict with a teacher ends up with her teaching his course. A game of Quidditch grinds to a halt when she rescues the snitch, but her greatest challenge pits her against the Academy itself.
When one of her new friends accidentally creates a robotic swarm capable of devouring the entire Academy, she's the only one that believes it's more than a threat. Finding and hiding it, she desperately seeks a place for it, but in a world where mad science and artificial intelligence threatens entire worlds, will anyone give her ward the chance it needs?
About the Author:
Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.
So, Dyson's back, again. I'm much happier with this opening than the previous ones. Hopefully it works, but if it doesn't, let me know.
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