a work in progress | Chapter 1

By Zach Cleland

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/29/2013

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Traditional Fantasy

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About the Book:

Marlow, forced to leave his first really safe home in a land of bandits and rogues, travels further away from his lands into foreign lands rich with magic and ruled over by a dark force that wants Marlow killed.

About the Author:

Zach Cleland is the youngest of four boys, all of whom are over 6' tall, and he is currently attending Berry College as an economics major.

Author's Note:

this is all a pretty rough draft that is obviously still in the works. I end up getting really excited about it and posting more to it even though it still needs work. Any advice, criticism, or suggestions are welcomed I know there is plenty of editing that needs to be done.

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