Cheval | The Story of Ruth

By Delilah Honeycombe

Draft 1 Posted Date: 10/28/2012

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Contemporary Fantasy

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About the Book:

Ruth is a young woman with a lot on her plate--gruesome nightmares, a crabby boss, a missing father and kidnappers. Throw some magic in and you have quite the mess on your hands, as Ruth soon discovers.

About the Author:

At the age of 19, reading/writing has always been an integral part of life. A small town girl, with big dreams of being published.

Author's Note:

Please read and tell me what I do right and wrong, but in the nicest way as possible (but if it sucks...let me know). I'm especially concerned about the scene between Ruth and her mother. I haven't ever really had critiques done on my work, so the more the merrier. Mostly I want to know if I should continue on with this story, or move onto something else. It's gotten long enough to the point where I need to decide if it's worth it or not. Thank you so much to everyone! I really appreciate it (even if you hate my writing--anything helps!). If you see anything else that stinks, let me know.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Dialogue

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