Coma

By Rosemaryjr

Draft 1 Posted Date: 11/17/2011

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Genre:

General Mystery

Word Count:

3,126

About the Book:

"Have you ever felt like the world you lived in was simply a dream? That if you just force yourself to wake, all of the happenings of the day would just be a made up scene inside your mind? For me I always felt that way about everything." Is he sleeping? Is he alive? To discover the depths and find the answers he must open seven doors guarded by beasts and monsters. To get to those doors he'll need to find the truth behind the first. "I've never seen so many monsters, huge insects of every imagining. They're eating me, burrowing inside."

About the Author:

My name is Rosemary Jasmine Rivera. I'm a 24 year old Hispanic, female writer with a BA in English concentration Creative Writing. I self published two books.

Author's Note:

My name is Rosemary Jasmine Rivera and this will be my second novel. I want to shed light on sexual abuse victims and feel as though this novel would help me do it. I have written and published two books: Ahii: Another story about a girl... and Autobiography?! If you like my work feel free to support me by pledging in my fundraisers. http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ahii/because-im-a-nobody-my-first-two-years-on-my-own?ref=recently_launched http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ahii/coma-join-the-mystery

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