... With Fortune and Men's Eyes ... | A strange, eventful history of our time...

By R P Steeves

Draft 3 Posted Date: 11/23/2011

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About the Book:

25 years ago, a group of heroes saved the world and changed it forever. Now, intrepid reporter Kat Regan and her cameraman, Poe, attempt to reassemble the members of the Troupe for an anniversary expose about that seminal event. But is someone trying to kill these international heroes? And can Kat ferret out the location of the members who have been missing for decades? Is the nemesis of the group, the man who tried to plunge the world into the Dark Ages, Dr. Bronze, alive and on the loose? And what is the terrible secret that the members of the Troupe have decided to carry with them to their graves? Kat and Poe find themselves embroiled in a tale of conspiracy and redemption for the ages. But will they -- and the world -- survive?

About the Author:

Rich was born and raised in Connecticut, has a Master’s degree in education, and taught middle school for nine years. He enjoys solving puzzles & rollerblading

Author's Note:

This is an idea I had back in college, about 15 years ago, that has been kicking around in my head for a while. I started writing this draft back in 2008 and recently returned to it. I like the overall concept, but I want to be sure that my execution is working, that they characters are interesting and consistent and that the world I have built is believable and engaging.

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