Evening Dawn

By Michael R Underwood

Draft 1 Posted Date: 8/31/2011

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Traditional Fantasy

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About the Book:

A petrified warrior becomes flesh again during an eclipse, but only for minutes. She lives each day only during the dawn, returning again and again to stone.

About the Author:

Michael works as an independent publishers' representative. In his free time, he dances Argentine Tango and studies Renaissance martial arts.

Author's Note:

This is a trying-to-be-flash-fiction piece I wrote this summer in the Clarion West Write-a-Thon. I'd like to get it under 1000 words, but mostly I just want to make sure it *works*.

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