By Jordan Montgomery

Draft 1 Posted Date: 7/25/2011

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Traditional Fantasy

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About the Book:

Twenty year old Zophar Nightshadow leaves home to find direction in his life and becomes entangled in the internal politics of a dangerous organization.

About the Author:

Jordan is a semi shy and quirky reader, writer, and struggling author with diverse interests and an unrelated college degree trying to plan out his future.

Author's Note:

This isn't quite a full blown novel. It's more of a short, standalone story that introduces my protagonist prior to the events of my novel which I plan on uploading after I evaluate some of the feedback I receive on this.

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