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Posted on 5/29/2012

Pick one book that you want to finish next & post your progress here as you go. Posting progress can promote the book, motivate the author and  provide insight into how writers write a story.

Suggestion only, but maybe your first post could start with where your story came from and why you are writing it. Then say where you are at the moment and what you will do next.

My novel, The Phoenix Diary, began with a series of dreams. They were different but had a common feel. It was years before I realized they were connected by geography and time, taking place in the same imaginary world. I wrote the dreams as scenes, dropped them into a Joseph Campbell plot structure and the story came naturally. The clear advantage is I am able to use my memory when writing most of the story. The writing is easy; time consuming but not difficult. So far, I have 53,000 words completed of a 100k hard science fiction book.

Lately, I've been learning about basic editing. Progress at the moment consists of editing the completed chapters into a "final" draft. Today, I edited chapter 6 of 15. Next :) edit chapter 7!

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11 months, 21 days ago

GD - This is a great idea, but I'm not sure I should participate, since both of my projects are in their early stages. I only have a few chapters of one and a handful of the other, and they're nowhere near completion.
I like your idea, though. Kind of like coaching, this a bit more directly than the whole of BC. :)
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11 months, 21 days ago


Thanks, GD,

I have been screwing around, I admit it. I'm pretending to do research. What I need to do is to figure out how best to dispose of a few of my no-longer-useful characters (I've reworked the dynamics of my central bit of business), and get this stalled choo-choo chugging again. 

Sly began as a short story. I had created an illustration of Hey, Diddle, Diddle for an art school class. I decided to write, in the spirit of many an annotated classic, a companion narrative, an explanation of the long-lost history behind a piece of beloved nonsense.  

I'm not giving up on Sly! My thinking is a little muddled at the moment, but I'll pull myself together and persevere. 

If anyone is thinking that I've been intimidated by the reviews I've gotten, don't worry about me on that account. That's not it at all.

The forthcoming murder-mystery is so complex (it's based upon what could have happened, as I see it, but didn't) that I am temporarily at a loss about how to proceed. But I'm beginning to emerge from my fog. 

I do have to deal with that despised first chapter. Eventually. For now, I'm going to concentrate on pushing this train wreck a bit further down the track.


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11 months, 21 days ago

I'm in the death throes - er, I mean, final chapters - of Strain right now.  The first 5 chapters are posted here, and in real life I'm about halfway through chapter 10.  I think it's maybe going to have about 11 or 12 chapters when it's "done," but I don't outline as I write (the characters never stick to the plan), so I really have no idea.  I just know how it's going to end, and it's definitely working significantly in that direction at this point, so I think I'm close!

This story - which I anticipate will have a fingertip hold on novel length when finished, as it's sitting at a word count of just over 47K right now - arose as an amalgam of several incomplete story/character ideas that rolled around in my mind and got semi-spit out onto paper several years ago.  I did a lot of fiction/creative writing in high school, then put it aside for the next 5 years while I was in college, and when I tried to write again after that, I thought I'd lost it completely.  My brain didn't want to think creatively anymore after years of serious research papers. 

And then last December I stumbled across the world of m/m romance, and suddenly, all of my previous story scratchings burst back into life.  If I'd only known way back when that there was a whole market for exactly what I was already trying to write (and thought no one else would ever want to read)! 

Anyway, in short, Strain was born of a series of failed attempts from many years ago and a new-found love of and appreciation for the m/m romance genre, which let me come at this project from a new angle and with new passion.  I edit as I write (so I go back and reread what's been written already before I start writing each day and edit for style and content), which is especially important for me considering that I don't always know where the heck my boys are going and have to be sure that wherever it is, it fits with where they've been.  I try to edit from a reader's perspective, too, so I read through it rather dispassionately and cut and add as I think is appropriate/necessary from the reader's POV.  It's still super rough - like I say, this is my first major attempt at creative writing in 7 years - but I'm having a good time with it, and my couple of beta readers have given me positive feedback on it, which feels good, too.  :)



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11 months, 21 days ago

Great idea for a thread, GD!

If anyone's following my books, they've probably noticed that I recently reposted every single chapter of the first book of the trilogy (A Kaliphian Matter: Revelations). I had been stuck on a transitional chapter in the middle of the second book (A Kaliphian Matter: Transformations) and basically, as a major tactic in PROCRASTINATION, I went back to the first book. There were some plot lines that I had decided while working on the second book that needed to be changed. Of course to do this, I had to reopen the first book, make the changes there, edit for continuity, and so on, and ended up slashing another 10,000 words.

From there, I returned to the second book - to the FIRST chapter - and reread/edited the first few chapters based on the changes I had made in the first book. Well, now I'm right back to the transitional chapter that had been giving me grief for months. Yesterday, I completed a draft of that chapter. Of course, today, while I should have been concentrating on a monograph on GERD, I was thinking about some changes I want to make to that chapter.

My plan is to whip that problem chapter into shape (well, at least to the point where I'm okay with it) by the end of this week, then post it along with the revisions of the preceding chapters. From there, I can finish the edits and rewrites to the rest of book 2 and get that posted as well. I just have to resist the urge to open up the third book and start fiddling around with that. :)

As for where the ideas for this book came from - I have been jotting down stories for as long as I can remember. I started this book almost 30 years ago while in college, then put it aside (it was typed on a typewriter). I honestly couldn't tell you what was the inspiration for it or how the characters came along.

A few years ago, I typed the entire text into my first Windows computer, and put it aside again. It was crap - and very, very, very long. When I got laid off from my last job in 2009, I dug it out again and basically ripped it to shreds and did some massive rewriting. I got some feedback from a published author, then did some more massive rewriting. Since it was still very long, I decided to split it into three books - which led to even more massive rewriting.

And I've been editing and tweaking it since I joined this site. :)

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11 months, 21 days ago

Some of you have already been hearing about me writing my book of almost a decade Hands of Ash, which is only the first book out of two (maybe three, but it's looking like two right now). I originally only had 20 chapters and thought I needed to just finish out the editing, but since it wasn't properly rounded out, I'm adding 14 chapters originally slated for the second book.

As reference, I already wrote about 40 chapters, I'm in rewrites I guess you can say.

With those 14 chapters, my book will round out at 34 chapters if I don't split any. This could also put it into the 170k range. Right now I have 109+ words up here in the form of chapters 1-22. I am currently writing chapter 27, which will put me at the half way mark of these chapter additions, and editing 23-26. My progress has been quite blazing ever since I bought my typewriter. Best purchase I ever made. But, even with my additions, I won't be done because I have to go back and do some more editing with 2 scenes that need rewritten due to POV issues, detail tweaks, grammatical hick-ups and so on.

Where did Hands come from? Well, it was a little high school thing that I did for fun. College came along, and I still worked on it occasionally, but not seriously until my sophomore year. Then I whipped it out and found that it needed some serious work (a complete rewrite) but it was quite salvageable with minor plot changes and a couple characters to toss. So far the reception has been relatively good.
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11 months, 21 days ago

Great input!

Amazing, how some of us are completing something that we started years ago. (I began The Phoenix Diary in 2004.)
Nicki wrote, "...Strain was born of a series of failed attempts from many years ago...."
Angela wrote, "I started this book almost 30 years ago...."
LeeAnna wrote, "Where did Hands come from? Well, it was a little high school thing that I did for fun."

Others may be at the beginning of a process that simply cannot be forced.
Laura wrote, "...both of my projects are in their early stages. I only have a few chapters of one and a handful of the other, and they're nowhere near completion."
Mimi wrote, "I'm not giving up on Sly! My thinking is a little muddled at the moment, but I'll pull myself together and persevere."

Maybe for some creativity is not subject to the will and we have no choice but to write as the story comes to us.

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11 months, 21 days ago

Hi:

I'm currently expanding a short story called The Fate Merchant into a novel.  I'd written it as a short story a while ago during a break from writing my first novel and then moved on to other things.  To be honest, I can't remember what inspired it. 

It was only after posting it here and receiving some pretty positive feedback that I thought it might be worth exploring.

I'm posting the chapters as I write them, which is something I've never done before.  I usually never show first drafts to anyone.  But the desire to get new chapters up as fast as possible is a great way to plow through the first draft.  I usually revise as I go, which slows down the process. 

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11 months, 21 days ago

"Maybe for some creativity is not subject to the will and we have no choice but to write as the story comes to us."

GD, I think you're spot on there, at least in my experience.  I know that I have a very hard time trying to force the writing.  If the muse is asleep, writing is like torture; but when the story is there, it's there, and I'd better whip out my net and catch it like the beautiful, graceful butterfly it is.  I couldn't imagine trying to write on a hard deadline.  I think it would kill the story dead.

And Marc, I've had a very similar experience here.  I loathed sharing unfinished work with anyone before I started writing Strain, but I've found that by putting it out there and talking about it with people, it keeps me motivated.  I have to work on it; I have to get it done.  Otherwise I have people in real life who would be happy to kill me with their bare hands for leaving them hanging!  That's a bit of incentive right there.  :)  And of course, the feedback on here has been wonderful.  I always get a little giddy and do a little happy dance whenever I see that somebody has posted a new review.  I can't get better if I don't know what's not working!

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11 months, 21 days ago

Okay, GD, you twisted my arm. I'll talk. (Haha, like that's ever been a problem with me.)
I got the idea for Aequitas through a writing challenge on another web site. It was supposed to be schmexy and all that, but I wanted a character that would be more than a pretty face. I thought of the books I'd been reading at the time, and started thinking about what I hadn't seen before. The idea of the Reapers popped into my head, and soon I had imagined up a whole bunch of them and an explanation for their existence. The original (much shorter) version was some fighting, sex and death - all that good stuff. ;) But I realized after I finished the piece that I wanted to know much more about these things, so that led me to where I am now - trying to relay what's in my head to words on paper. 
It's tortuously slow.
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11 months, 20 days ago

I'm with Marc & Niki. Nobody in their right mind shows their first draft to strangers but there's something professional about many people here that makes their advice helpful. Kinda like undressing for the doctor.

Thanks, Laura. That's good insight into how ideas pop. Maybe you positively wanted a better character because you had one in there, somewhere. Interesting too, how a good idea can come with kin.

I spent this morning researching a piece of meteorite shrapnel from Sikhote-Alin because it was radioactive dated to the same time as an important period in The Phoenix Diary. It's age baffled the researchers but made ideas pop into my head. Now, for the first time, I have a detailed plot background that supports my story. And a sequel. Woot!

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