About the Book:
Newlyweds share a strange breakfast in bed.
About the Author:
All writings are fueled by chai and a Ouija board. Okay, maybe not the Ouija board. Repped by Jennie Goloboy at Red Sofa Literary.
This is another flash piece I did based on a visual prompt. The picture was of the exterior of an old hotel under a mass of churning clouds. This was my submission. I know flash can be difficult to review as it's so short, but right now, I'm trying to focus on honing my short program, so any feedback is appreciated. Thank you for reading.
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Overall Feedback, Pacing, Setting