Hands of Ash | Book One of The Descendants

By Lee Holt

Draft 58 Posted Date: 11/11/2014

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High / Epic Fantasy

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About the Book:

Thirteen years ago, Melody Moonari watched as monsters made of ash killed her mother and destroyed her village. Now eighteen, she is the adopted daughter of a king with a single opportunity to choose a suitor before one is chosen for her. Enter Prince Adamar Vegana, on of the only battled tested leaders in Adlar. Melody thinks she has found her answer when Adamar receives news that an army of ash monsters have wiped out his capital. Now Melody will take it upon herself to find out where the these ash monsters come from, and who is behind them.

About the Author:

The most strangely motivated procrastinator to ever write fantasy, and a real life vampire. (Damn you, genetics!) Her personal rivals are laziness and the sun. She collects typewriters and books because archaic things live longer than these plasticy machines. She tries very hard to be contrary and suffers from repeating things her mother once told her. Hands of Ash is her first novel, but hopefully not her last.

Author's Note:

It's all here! I'm finally done with the revisions. I'm looking for feedback on the complete work since I've added 15 chapters.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing, Continuity

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