Vârcolac | WIP 2014 NaNoWriMo

By Lisa Hoekstra

Draft 4 Posted Date: 3/27/2015

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 3 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 5 Reviews

Genre:

Urban Fantasy

Word Count:

1,946

About the Book:

Audrey van Vliet thought the world was perfect. Newly engaged to Riley, her boyfriend of seven years, they stroll the beach under the light of a full moon, the fall wind crisp and scented with winter. Then the howls start. Screams followed. The chaos of violence is only the start of her new life. Brown fur, pointed teeth and the yells of her fiance as he is dragged away haunt her nightmares. But sleepless nights only strengthen her resolve to find her lost love and save him from the monsters in the dark.

About the Author:

Lisa Hoekstra is a freelance writer and editor with a passion for reading and desire to explore new worlds... even if they're only in her mind. A small town girl who lives in the big city, her goal is to publish one book. Just one. And then she'll decide where to go from there.

Author's Note:

I'm looking for some feedback on my setting descriptions specifically, because I have some issues getting the right balance between too much and too little. I tend to go to the extremes. Also, as I add more chapters, I wouldn't mind some feedback on my "world building" - technically this takes place in the "now"... but really, any feedback would be appreciated! (side note: there isn't much here right now, since I'm still editing the first bits, but I'm curious - based on the what's there, would you read more?)

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Setting

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