Forever Bound | Book Two

By Amanda Kimberley

Draft 9 Posted Date: 1/26/2016

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Book Rating (all versions):

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Genre:

Paranormal Romance

Word Count:

36,807

About the Book:

Alec was everything Lilith imagined a lover could be. He was caring, sensual, and attentive to every one of her needs. She wanted and needed him badly to break the hold Jade Emperor had over her. But could this bond last an eternity with Cheng-Huang's sentence of damnation on them both? Would the bond withstand the werewolves' rebellion that was fast approaching? And could this bond transcend through time as his dead heart learns to beat for Obsidian? It was a chance Lilith would have to take in order to defeat the werewolves who planned to give rise to Demetrese, ruler of the demon Underworld, during the rarest of planetary alignments in the Ming Dynasty.

About the Author:

Amanda Kimberley has been writing for three decades and is a nationally recognized no non-sense nonfiction writer named Kimberley Linstruth-Beckom by day, who focuses mostly on the health condition known as fibromyalgia due to her own diagnosis in late 2005. By night, she dons her bathrobe and enjoys typing out urban fantasy paranormal romances at her white marble desk. She likes to nibble on chocolate and potato chips while drawing out her characters. She's also been known to have music from her iPhone playing in the background.

Author's Note:

I'd only like a general review on pacing, plot, character development, dialogue, etc. at this point because this story is still in the early draft stages. I have added more chapters so you can all see where the story is headed.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity

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