About the Book:
Zoë Donahue is a small-time web designer turned accidental hacker who gets nabbed by the FBI. Her only chance to stay out of jail is to cooperate and to go on a sting operation inside a bank run by former citizens of North Korea. Along the way, she meets up with her intellectual and emotional opposite, Charisse Snowe. Together, they have to fight off government agents and international terrorists and save the world.
About the Author:
Graphic Designer from Montreal, Canada wants to take a hand at being an author and writing stories that people will find engaging, entertaining and perhaps insightful. The most important thing, more than the elusive promise of fame and fortune is to get my stories out there for people to enjoy above all.
This book is still in its early development due to a very complex plot involving the NSA, FBI, Al Qaeda and North Korea. This is an small sample of the opening of the book meant to set the overall tone and story arc. Things only get more complicated here on out.
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