Blood & Candy

By Terryll Preston

Draft 3 Posted Date: 7/30/2013

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Genre:

Noir / Hard-Boiled

Word Count:

9,027

About the Book:

From the shadows of her shattered innocence, a fourteen year old girl becomes a ruthless instrument of vengeance for her governess.

About the Author:

Terryll Preston was a soldier, is a fan of imagination and a geek. He is an artist and, of course, writes; which he considers his first love. Texas is his home.

Author's Note:

This is one of the very first stories I wrote with serious intent and, eventually, posted online. Though I have revised and updated it recently, it's still based on an older writing style I once used. I would really like to get some feedback as to address any problems with my writing. While I consider myself a good writer, I still have doubts about my talent. Please read and critique if you have the spare time to do so. I could really use the advice. Also, please excuse any errors in the Japanese/English translation of the chapter titles. All I had available was Google Translate...

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