About the Book:
The public and violent death of an elderly NY personal injury lawyer uncovers plans to stoke regional conflicts half way around the globe.
About the Author:
A biologist turned IP litigator. Lived in several countries, collecting their languages and citizenships along the way. Now living in NYC; next year - ?
This is a revised version that changes the method of killing from neck-breaking to shooting, and the suspected killer from a homeless person to an Army veteran. Clearly, this is still very much a work in progress, but these changes, I'm quite certain, are permanent and necessary for the plot to work. Any feedback will be much appreciated. I know it's too wordy and I'll need to edit a lot, but I'd like to know if (on the assumption that you can get through the wordiness), the story is compelling enough to keep reading it. Thank you.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Plot, Pacing