The Lioness in Winter

By Maria Granovsky

Draft 15 Posted Date: 2/21/2012

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 5 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 9 Reviews

Genre:

General Mystery

Word Count:

14,362

About the Book:

The public and violent death of an elderly NY personal injury lawyer uncovers plans to stoke regional conflicts half way around the globe.

About the Author:

A biologist turned IP litigator. Lived in several countries, collecting their languages and citizenships along the way. Now living in NYC; next year - ?

Author's Note:

This is a revised version that changes the method of killing from neck-breaking to shooting, and the suspected killer from a homeless person to an Army veteran. Clearly, this is still very much a work in progress, but these changes, I'm quite certain, are permanent and necessary for the plot to work. Any feedback will be much appreciated. I know it's too wordy and I'll need to edit a lot, but I'd like to know if (on the assumption that you can get through the wordiness), the story is compelling enough to keep reading it. Thank you.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Plot, Pacing

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